Watching TV is still a dominating pastime for several people in existing time. Despite the rapid growth of the internet and mobile technology. Although it is a powerful entertainment form, however, there are serious physiological and psychological ill effects of excessive exposure to TV in my view
Let us first understand the connection between TV viewership and the overall fitness of the body. Various studies have revealed that TV makes people so addicted that they start procrastinating on the prior job such as sports, work and studies to continue witnessing the fun and excitement. Spectators keep stuffing up their mind with a variety of content including movies, soap operas, music and news which gradually impede their mental and physical agility. Generally, it is seen that one finds it hard to get rid of the temptation of watching TV despite the awareness of the negative implications- time wastage, a distraction from work. Consequently, no involvement in sports and long TV hours develop lethargic body language and attitude.
We must also take into consideration the ways how the content shown overpowers emotions and alters the perceptions of viewers. Most people believe that watching TV is harmless fun and they are not addicted to it. Whereas, in reality, they tend to give more priority to screen time rather than spending it with family members. gatherings because it is not as exciting as a cricket match or action film. This way, their face to face interaction is diminishing and virtual communication is on the rise. This is undoubtedly a precarious change for society.
In conclusion, TV is making people mentally crippled land physically weaker in the guise of non-stop entertainment through hundreds of channels.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, so, still, whereas, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33214285714 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09121327148 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653571428571 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 93.0 20.2975951904 458% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 372.334079379 49.4020404114 754% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 497.666666667 106.682146367 466% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 93.3333333333 20.7667163134 449% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.0 7.06120827912 425% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118825770031 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751451958595 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0148956855314 0.0667982634062 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705748695117 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0100474273688 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 50.3 13.0946893788 384% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -22.92 50.2224549098 -46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.6 11.3001002004 350% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.82 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.32 8.58950901804 155% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 9.78957915832 592% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 39.2 10.1190380762 387% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 40.0 10.7795591182 371% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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