Media is a very important for the society since it is the one of the fastest and efficient way to receive information on various subjects, most importantly on current affairs. Despite, news reporter’s main concern on causes and emergencies around the nations while, other feel that they do not focus on positive and negative developments which affect society as a globe. Although there are many positive consequences, I partially agree with the statement.
To commence with, media presenting problems which recently affect which our nations and their consequences for same. There are many news which should be present in media because it has two sides of result positive and negative also. When this type of news telecasted at that time people can realize the situation and take decision accordingly. To illustrate good example of it, when the natural disaster take place like tsunami, earthquake and many more at that time media cover this topic at immediate basis to warn inhabitants people who near the spot when the situation occur. Secondly, it provide clean and neat information about globe situation like which nation has what type of situation in their pandemic and who they overcome from that by taking necessity steps. For instance, in the UK there was earthquake occur near the Eithro state at that time this information first sprayed by news in all over the world and people who live nearby area migrant from this place as soon as possible. As a result, there are many lives saved because of the information and many people take it seriously and take decision to migrant.
However, sometime news reporters focus on development such as high-story building, an infrastructure and many more but this type of information reporting is not major attract and even not useful to people it is good to telecast once but not more than that. For example, in China an engineer’s made high-five building which is totally technology based which is good example of technology and advancement and it is useful information among the development.
In conclusion, while news some time not focus in development, I would partially agree that they focus on main concern which is useful for all of us. It is suggested that, when they telecasted such an emergencies kind of report at that time in between they should put information about developments and that kind of stuff.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
... their consequences for same. There are many news which should be present in media b...
^^^^
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: much news; a good deal of news
... their consequences for same. There are many news which should be present in media becaus...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...o sides of result positive and negative also. When this type of news telecasted at t...
^^^^
Line 3, column 594, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
... when the situation occur. Secondly, it provide clean and neat information about globe ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'emergencies'' or 'emergency's'?
Suggestion: emergencies'; emergency's
...sted that, when they telecasted such an emergencies kind of report at that time in between ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 7.30460921844 342% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05089058524 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73601388929 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493638676845 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.2662299914 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.785714286 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0714285714 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187914867558 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071085042496 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647763141045 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133572706354 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055736193039 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
... their consequences for same. There are many news which should be present in media b...
^^^^
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: much news; a good deal of news
... their consequences for same. There are many news which should be present in media becaus...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...o sides of result positive and negative also. When this type of news telecasted at t...
^^^^
Line 3, column 594, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
... when the situation occur. Secondly, it provide clean and neat information about globe ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'emergencies'' or 'emergency's'?
Suggestion: emergencies'; emergency's
...sted that, when they telecasted such an emergencies kind of report at that time in between ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 7.30460921844 342% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05089058524 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73601388929 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493638676845 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.2662299914 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.785714286 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0714285714 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187914867558 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071085042496 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647763141045 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133572706354 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055736193039 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.