Recently, advertisements from companies usually claim that their products are new. Several factors might contribute to this phenomenon. In my opinion, this is truly an improvement.
Businesses like cosmetics and foods brand frequently advert that their products are new. For instance, a new series of lip cream were launched last week claiming that they have new colors and consistency. New various flavor of biscuits were also offered for Eid Al Fitr next week. This might be due to their marketing strategy in order to attract more customer. New products basically will gain customers’ curiousity. Additionally, this method usually employed by many companies to make their products differ from other competitor. Therefore, the customers will notice it as unique products.
In my point of view, the way the companies offer their products is a positive development because it will make shopping more interesting and challenging. As consumer, the more novel products offered in the new ways the more options we have. Therefore, we should be more selective and smart as well. For example, talking about the new series of lip cream above, to prove the products, we should check the ingredients and the product information. Additionally, we can also check any review from social media or beauty vloggers. Beside triggering us to be smarter, the disclaimer of advertisements somehow make us more enjoy in shopping. We will be more exciting in trying new products, share it with friends and family and also in some condition gain us more confident if the new products becoming viral and new trend.
To sum up, the marketing strategy to gain consumers attention makes advertisements emphasize their product as new arrivals. This situation is a good point that can make consumers smarter and more selective.
- The table below gives information about rail transport in four countries in 2007 61
- The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
- The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013 56
- The bar graph below shows the amount of carbon emissions in different countries during three different years Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people We can learn just as much from books films and the internet Do you agree or disagree 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, talking about, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27335640138 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89635292854 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553633217993 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1692696426 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2105263158 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2105263158 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302415659735 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990263288473 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763645005637 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21249059036 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513445477754 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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