Thera are many different types of music in the world today.why do we need music?Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Currently,a host of various kinds of music can be seen globally,this is direct result of how people lives have a powerful link with music,which relies on some evident reasons such as the beneficial effect of music on human's stress.Further,it stands to the reason,that both conventional music and national music,which is world wide at present ,have the same level of importance.
It is apparent enough,that human's life require listening to music for several reasons.The first point to consider is,it is highly proved by scientists through some scientific surveys that,listening to our preferred music approximately 15 minutes a day,can work as a powerful stress reliever,in other words,alleviating stress is the major role of listening to music in our lives.Moreover and equally importantly it is definitely reached through some scientific sources that,listening to music and enjoying the tune as well as the melody can refresh the mind and put the people in pleasant as well as jolly mood,which can help human to appear more creative day by day.Another significant point to consider is music can be at service of entertainment section of our lives,because it can provide us a chance to exercise or dance with it in a more effective and energetic way.
Clearly the level of importance of both conventional and national music is high enough in our world.There is no doubt that traditional music plays a vital role in denoting every countries' cultures and as it is obvious,culture is an imperative part of every nations.thus,preserving the traditional music admittedly is our crucial responsibility to perform in our nations.It is also worthy to consider that international music can certainly show the unity of all individual beings as a result of we are listening to the same music all over the globe. For instance, the international music that is usually performed by international singers for football world cup can improve the sense of unity in human beings.
By way of conclusion, we have numerous types of music, that is necessary for people to fulfil their souls' need.furthermore,these two sorts of music,traditional music,which is a culture illustrator ,as well as national music are both vital to our melodic world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29526462396 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.53233656863 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520891364903 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 20.2975951904 350% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 251.107467034 49.4020404114 508% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 380.2 106.682146367 356% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.8 20.7667163134 346% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.6 7.06120827912 363% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382115606434 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.250343468773 0.084324248473 297% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779546503177 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277920217711 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734033587226 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.4 13.0946893788 301% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -9.05 50.2224549098 -18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.2 11.3001002004 285% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.64 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.2 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 10.1190380762 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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