Music is food for the soul. It plays a very important part in the relaxation of the human mind. People’s choice concerning music varies according to their personality, mood and upbringing. Nowadays music is used for medication and exercise apart from entertainment. The gym which I visit always have hip hop or rock music playing, motivating the people and energizing our body for an effective workout. You can also notice malls and shopping complex always playing popular songs creating a happy environment for the shoppers.
Though International and Traditional music are equally important, these days it is the International Pop music which is precedent to country music.
Music is popular among everyone, young and old alike. The youth of today prefer International Pop music, Rock concerts and the cinematic music. On the other hand, the older generation prefers opera, traditional and devotional music.
Traditional Music plays a great role in enriching the culture and heritage of a country. Every country has its own unique music like opera and Jazz in western countries & Carnatic and Hindustani music in India. Our ancestors believed in expressing their emotions through music and this unique melody is an integral part of our culture which is irreplaceable.
Music, these days, has become a commercial affair. People are much more interested in making money and hence only such music which is popular globally and with the youth is being sponsored.
Today’s generation should be made to realize the importance and beauty of traditional music. More schools should indulge in Folk singing competitions and provide traditional musical instruments to students like the sitar, flute, saxophone, etc. Parents should take responsibility to ensure that children are aware of the traditional music by taking them to classical music concerts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'hence', 'so', 'apart from', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.31875 0.247107183377 129% => OK
Verbs: 0.140625 0.155533422707 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10625 0.0946595960268 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.034375 0.0501214627716 69% => OK
Pronouns: 0.034375 0.0437548338989 79% => OK
Prepositions: 0.084375 0.122226691241 69% => OK
Participles: 0.05625 0.0403226058552 139% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87343195102 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.01875 0.0326793684256 57% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.084375 0.0861772015684 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0125 0.021408717616 58% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0125 0.011925033212 105% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1860.0 1933.35771543 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 316.048096192 92% => OK
Chars per words: 6.41379310345 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.396551724138 0.374742101984 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.289655172414 0.28420135186 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.21724137931 0.203846283523 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.162068965517 0.137316102897 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87343195102 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.037074148 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606896551724 0.56093040696 108% => OK
Word variations: 67.1678027404 60.7387585426 111% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.1111111111 20.7743622355 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6683922153 49.517814964 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 127.492653851 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 20.7743622355 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.277777777778 0.814263465372 34% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 45.0766283525 49.1944974215 92% => OK
Elegance: 2.19402985075 1.69124875643 130% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.543062642197 0.332605444948 163% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0839856272781 0.102741220458 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0558916647813 0.0668466124924 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.592136887028 0.534860350844 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.16956370602 0.148594505496 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.224114382856 0.134430193775 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959834198744 0.0742795772207 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.294426240869 0.324371583561 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0808575557034 0.0638462369009 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.35014687516 0.228012699653 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591662547594 0.058150111329 102% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 5.90881763527 203% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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