There have been many inventions in human history, such as the wheel. Some people think the most important thing is the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Many people say that the internet is the most effective discovery in human history. Personally, I disagree with this view because there are other inventions which are more beneficial.
To begin with, although Internet facilitates the transmission of information worldwide, its downsides could not be overlooked. Firstly, young people have a tendency to discourage their real communication. For example, they spend most of their time chatting with online friends on social networks such as Facebook and Twitter rather than participating in outdoor activities with their families. Additionally, the contents of the current sites containing much more violent information, allowing adults to imitate easily. As a result, crime rate in adults is increasing significantly. Finally, by sitting in front of wide screens, individuals could accompany a sedentary lifestyle, which causes many health problems associated with heart attack, and obesity, so the internet has been not the best design in human society.
On the other hand, in human history, more important innovations invented, which made our life become better. Firstly, the discovery of hand-writing that enables people to pass on their knowledge conveniently from time to time very good idea. If humans do not develop this form of communication, the internet might not appear in some recent decades. Furthermore, with modern vehicles and transports such as monorails and airplanes, people might commute to work and travel more quickly and conveniently, and this have a big contribution to the development of human society.
In conclusion, in my opinion, besides the internet, we also have many innovations that bring more benefits for the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60384615385 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03612129935 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638461538462 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9864570439 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.076923077 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312347885519 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10027899903 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720148450361 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192982519912 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687307400881 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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