Maintaining good health is a priority for everyone as it is the most crucial aspect of human 's life. However, some individuals seem to rely heavily on doctors and medication instead of making healthy lifestyle choices. In my opinion, while medical assistance can be necessary in certain circumstances, it should not replace the benefits of a healthy lifestyle.
On the one hand, there are circumstances where seeking medical help is essential, such as when dealing with chronic illnesses or diseases that require medical methods. In some cases, medication may be necessary to manage symptoms, prevent complications, or cure diseases. Doctors and healthcare professionals play a vital role in expecting and treating various illnesses and conditions, and their knowledge should not be overlooked.
On the other hand, pursuing a healthy lifestyle cannot be igored when someone try to stay in shape. A healthy lifestyle includes regular exercise, nutritious food, enough sleep,etc. These practices help prevent chronic diseases or the ones related to our bones, and can also improve out life'quality. Following a healthy lifestyle can increase energy levels, reduce stress and anxiety, and improve mood. Moreover, it reduces the dependence on medication and doctors, leading to long-term benefits and better quality of life.For instance, a study conducted by Dartmouth University in 2021 has shown that a person who do exercise 30-45 minutes and drink an appropriate amount of water everyday will not only have a smoother skin but life expectancy will be 15% longer than the usual ones.
In conclusion, while medical assistance is indispensable in some cases, it should not replace the significance of leading a healthy lifestyle.
- Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country while some people think it is bad Discuss both views and state your opinion 56
- Environmental damage is the problem of most countries What factors damage the environment and who should take responsibility 67
- In recent years more and more people are choosing to read e books rather than paper books Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this trend 73
- The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040 84
- The diagram shows the small scale production of smoked fish 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tries'.
Suggestion: tries
...lifestyle cannot be igored when someone try to stay in shape. A healthy lifestyle i...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
... exercise, nutritious food, enough sleep,etc. These practices help prevent chronic d...
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Line 3, column 523, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...erm benefits and better quality of life.For instance, a study conducted by Dartmout...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46641791045 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98981666255 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630597014925 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.513025398 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.083333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135820265931 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519332866271 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038798205778 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755012768184 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457421835818 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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