Throughout history, male leaders have led us into violence and conflict. If a society is governed by female leaders it will be more peaceful. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
History is our past events especially in terms of human beings activities which they had been performed in bygone days. From the former Times, it is analysis that most males are the king which dominance in market and ruled they whole society, yet also create the brutality and barrier. If female were Queen then it would be superior in terms of our past period. I firmly consummate discord to the right notion and reason of my inclination are articulated in the upcoming paragraph.
The Predominant justification to support my ideology is that the although woman could also be queen to rule the nation, yet that should be men to understand every sort of things without any involvement of emotion as well as Mercy. In other words, it is well known fact that the women are the kind-hearted person, and they cannot take any determine towards their own country apart from that men are the bold enough and speak any decision within a fraction of time in which there will be neither methods nor hurdles in across the nation. For example, in Nepal, till now any women had not been entered into any sort of minister related field.
Considering further, There can be a huge amount of mislaying if man had not been ruled in his world in the past days. To explicate, having said this, point is money so, so in that free women that suffered from dearth of generation owing to of house related works and maintaining both the sort of thing it might be adversity so, so better than women men rule the country and till now it is going on the accurate path. For instance, In India, from the period from 1895 to 1956, there were no women to rule the nation.
To conclude, Although women also be a part to rule the country and contained rights, yet blueprint of the specific nation might be different and hateful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 287, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... also create the brutality and barrier. If female were Queen then it would be supe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, well, apart from, for example, for instance, sort of, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6199376947 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38770364094 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551401869159 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.4216230056 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.818181818 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1818181818 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0750862499627 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301756468299 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0181370539959 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0475219147932 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00764245838517 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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