Physical activity plays an important role in the physical and psychological development of children during the intial years of their life. However, with the increasing urbanization and modernisation, outdoor activities are totally replaced with indoor games and thus increased the number of couch potatoes. In my opinion, it is a negative development because it affects the mental and phsical growth of youngsters.
There are multifarious reasons as to why modern technology has detrimental effect on juveniles. Firstly, urban areas eliminated the public playgrounds which is converted into malls,...
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Physical activity plays an
Physical activity plays an important role in the physical and psychological development of children during their initial years of life. However, with the increasing urbanization and modernisation, indoor activities have totally surpassed outdoor games and thus making children couch potatoes. In my opinion, this leads to negative development because it affects their mental and physical growth.
There are multifarious reasons which describe as to why urbanization has a detrimental effect on juveniles. Urban areas have eliminated the public playgrounds which have been converted into malls, shopping centres and housing complexes leaving no space for children to play outdoor games. Furthermore, this confines children to play in the streets, that creates chaos and adversely can be fatal for their lives. Increase in crime rate and abductions has also affected the decision of the parents to keep their children indoors. In fact, two siblings are missing since last week in Delhi while they were playing outside their house. Incidents like these scare the wits out of the parents and force them to confine their children to play indoors.
On the contrary, playing indoor/computer games is not in the best interest of the children. Physical interaction with the surroundings while running, playing cricket or football keeps the body clock balanced, which is affected while staying indoors. This usually makes them Nocturnal and ruins their overall growth, eventually, making them feel sick. Playing computer games might induce some quick reflexes, however, it promotes aggressive behaviour experiencing turmoil and changes their outlook towards life.
To sum it all up, it is rightly said that health is wealth and there's no substitute for physical activity. Not only it fosters fit and healthy lifestyle but also makes a person socially connected, valuing relationships.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
... are created by doing these activities. Thats why parents force their offsprings to p...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ve when younsters are able to influence a large number of society but indoor games are put detrim...
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Line 7, column 433, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to discipline'
Suggestion: to discipline
...are plays an important role in learning discipline, co-operation and sportsmanship skills....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, as to, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42441860465 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84629098362 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598837209302 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4621286763 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2105263158 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1052631579 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84210526316 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184642592056 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485670460537 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395893078091 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914028796766 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123957660455 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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