In the modern era of urbanization, the decline of living standard in developed cites has aroused people's concern. So serious is it, that people cannot turn a deaf ear to it anymore. As a result, both root of the situation and ways to deal with it will be shed a light in the following essay.
To begin with, unquestionably, the decrease in quality of life in big cities may be because of two crucial causes. First, all kinds of pollution such as water pollution, air pollution, and so on are taking place in most of large cities. It can be seen clearly that this phenomenon annoys and effects to people's health too much. Second, more and more local people from another area move to modern cities, which not only causes the high rate of competition and crime but also make it become too crowded to live.
To cope with the issue, countless measures have been applied, among which the chief one is that governments should promulgate some policies and cooperate with several worldwide organizations to prevent and aid polluted cities. Last but not least, every countries must motivate the development in rural areas, so that people will not try to move to cities anymore.
In conclusion, the matter of standard of living in modern cities have been becoming increasingly alarming. There are not the best and the only two solutions we can take. Nevertheless, it should be noted that people have to take strong actions to eliminate its negative effects in a long term and alter more positively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...t this phenomenon annoys and effects to peoples health too much. Second, more and more ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8023255814 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61452137339 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612403100775 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1420528899 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.25 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0793226940878 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276053592627 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439485697409 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0421645010339 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433183889757 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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