Topic: The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions?
Fauna is of the extinction owing to human activities on their habitats. The causes of this matter will be examined in this essay before some feasible solutions.
With regard to the humane factors affecting animal species, there are two main ones. Firstly, deforestation has been conducted for ages in order to make ways for factories, residential houses so that not only does the economy thrive but also the housing problem, which can be mitigated, however, the life of many species has to suffer from counter effect. Moreover, wood that is a backbone material for many industries is no longer available to be inhabitable for animals. Secondly, the tourism is one of the main pollutants in sea water because of wastes, not decomposed materials dumped into the sea by tour operators as well as travelers. In addition, so significantly does the oil exploitation industry affect the marine life associated with oil spill cases reported recently.
As for solutions to save animal species from human activities, the two ones can be analyzed. As far as the first suggestion is concerned, there should be a need for forest- based industry and companies, in general, to exploit the land with an effective and saving- environment plan. Specifically, once a tree is cut down, a new seed has to be planted after a particular period for ensuring the long term development of the economy and the habitat of animals on a large scale in an unpolluted atmosphere. Besides, sea environment should be kept clean as much as possible by raising the awareness of tourists coming to beach, lake and so on. Additionally, were the government not to impose more strict laws on hunting sea animals, a variety of life circle would come to an end.
In conclusion, the extinction of animal species is caused by human exploitation on land and in sea. Nevertheless, the feasibility of proposed solutions could help mitigate the problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, as for, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in general, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.028125 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89549589611 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60625 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8637326993 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.928571429 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192565064768 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757351864114 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10258457401 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148994104166 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955062166516 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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