One of the most conspicuous trend of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that while visiting any unknown place with group having tourist guide is better.There is widespread worry that it would lead myriad of concerns in one's life.In my opinion this apprehension is unwarranted and rejected.
To commence with, there are deluge of arguments in favour of having tour guide. The most preponderant on is that the knowledge about the place. To elaborate it, the guide known the place very well and all the attractive places can easily seen. It cannot only contribute to save time,but leads to numerous other benefits in various fields.Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers,masses can enhance the quality and productivity with much ease,efficacy and convenience.Needless to say,all these merits stand good at one's stead as far as augmenting the chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Furthermore, another pivotal aspect of this aforementioned prepositions is likely to help the excel and thrive in varied areas.Besides, the guide can make the group comfortable with them to survive.The group accomodation became easy.For instance,the study results published by the government of Australia clearly indicate that the guide while travelling is cruical and critical for the development of society.
On the other hand,a section of society contradicts the above - said view. They pondered that hiring tour guide is just a wastage of money.They think that visiting any place in group became more informative if they visit the place by themselves. Therefore it is clear that why some are not in favour of my view point.
To conclude that, having pondered over it is crystal clear that the benefits of tour guide are indeed to great dire too be ignored.
- Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree Provide relevant examples if necessary 61
- Travelling in group with a tour guide is the best way to travel Do you agree or disagree with this statement 84
- International travel has become cheaper more and more countries have opened their doors and more tourist go abroad for travelling Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages 84
- It is sometimes suggested that primary schoolchildren should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 84
- Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university in order to travel or to work Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21724137931 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04870459919 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606896551724 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.290334788 49.4020404114 260% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.3 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195505092392 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621402062238 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590827616461 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969290477677 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450639129363 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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