A university should accept male and female students equally in every subject.
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To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
In the contemporary society, academic environment in universities involves inequality of number of students who attend in the teaching process according to the gender. Although some people consider that there are equal numbers of male and female students in the each fields of study, I completely disagree this view taking into consideration the influence of this to the capacity of students and needs of community.
To begin with, the fields of science at the universities include diverse assignments, methods and learning area so that students can demonstrate their inelegancy ideas relatively to their interesting and ability being not equal members of the study. Majority part of female students might devote the scientific work which built on humanitarian sciences, simultaneously these specialty ought to cover only a few male students, alternatively, technical subjects might be attraction of the most numbers of male students compared to female ones. Thus, it is difficult to keep balance between genders who are part of study life.
Furthermore, our developed society need the people who are master in their fields regardless of gender that is why the study of university service as a means of preparing these kinds of people to be required layers of society. For instance, military fields contain more men than women so that the universities based on these specialities provide numerous male personnel whereas a few female prefer to show performance in these fields.
Taking everything into consideration, it seems to me that the same numbers of students on the atmosphere of the study indicates some drawbacks in terms of genders’ ability and society life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, thus, whereas, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4030418251 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00811165107 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58174904943 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.6866819316 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.625 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.875 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170429560161 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694255225011 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502017967459 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976390334941 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556995094231 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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