In recent years, many people believe that social media take the place of in person socialization between individuals. In spite of some advantages for the entrepreneurs, I think that the large use of social media leads to worse communication skills.
To begin with, the use of social media is beneficial for those who start their own business. It is undoubtable that in the past, the avenues were more limited for someone who wanted to start a new business. Social media, beginning with Facebook, and apps like Instagram, Snapchat and TikTok, open up possibilities for content creators to communicate with their audience around the world. This applies to life success stories, like Justin Bieber, who went viral and rose from relative obscurity, as well as more modest examples like the various instagram artists and models who interact and generate income and publicity from their loyal fan bases.
Despite these advantages, social media has degraded the general quality of communication. The most affected are the younger users. Young people today are more likely to communicate by texting and interacting through comments as they impatiently scroll through various feeds. In contrast, they should develop their interpersonal skills by telling jokes and arguing about personal and political topics. According to a recent survey, teenagers nowadays do not improve their communication skills, since they do not get quality feedback on their output and so develop haphazardly.
To sum up, social media has hurt communication, overshadowing the economic utility. In my opinion, parents ought to limit phone use for children, as they are more influenced than anyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, i think, in contrast, as well as, in my opinion, in spite of, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4061302682 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83664147231 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64367816092 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4805965834 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.538461538 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171948767425 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065132420773 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596778882102 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119193704099 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765389971265 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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