Businesses have always sought to make profits; meanwhile, the consciousness of the social obligations have increased these years. I completely agree with the idea that companies not only need to make money, but their responsibilities towards the public are also of crucial importance.
Admittedly, corporations have to make profits in order to survive in a competitive market. Furthermore, workers rely on the job opportunities corporations released to support their families and cover all kinds of expenses. With these burdens on shoulders, the major mission of companies should be to earn as much as profits they can. If a company fail to maintain their business, pay all the debts they borrowed or pay salaries to their employees, any concerns about social responsibility would be irrelevant. In other words, the social obligation is indeed essential, but companies can only make a positive contribution to society, if they are in good financial situation.
Having achieved the goal of making profits, corporations have a more important role to play in society. In my opinion, the major responsibility they have to achieve is to treat the environment well. For instance, with the widespread usage of the Internet, they can build a paperless office and reduce the number of trees cut down annually. Besides, the frequency of air-conditioning should also be limited in order to mitigate the potential possibility of exacerbating the climate change happened throughout the world. Finally, they should build up foundations and distribute fellowship to those in need.
By way of conclusion, it is necessary for companies to make money to survive in their business. Whereas, after achieving their goal to some extent, they should consider how to give back what they have obtained from society.
- Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- The pie chart and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000. 78
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- the line graph shows visits to and from the uk from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by uk residents in 1999. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevan 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, furthermore, if, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36749116608 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1270946856 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597173144876 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.739524514 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204856415723 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714039648711 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622695846445 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142553645853 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755771258744 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.