What are the advantages and disadvantages for children of watching television?
These days, watching television is quite a common habit of everyone. Especially children like watching television and spend over time sitting in front of it. However, there are both advantages and disadvantages to doing this. In further paragraphs, I will point out both sides and try to draw some conclusions.
Let’s begin by looking at the advantages for the young generation of television. One of the main positives of heading overseas is understanding more outside knowledge. Children’s parents can show them social education programs from a young age to help children understand from an early age. Next, there are also recreational programs that consist of films and cartoons that juveniles do like and want to watch every day. They can learn and understand human dignity by seeing movies that show good and bad attitudes of people and make also conclusions about them for the audience.
On the other hand, there are some obvious disadvantages that would arise. When you look at television for several hours can lead to negative effects. Many children who spend much time watching tv might feel a bit sense of isolation because they don't interact and don't communicate with anyone other than the tv. Secondly, the issue is that it can affect their health. For the exam, it may harm their eyesight due to over-watching. Moreover, we cannot always see useful programs and there are nonsense ones as well which are waste of time.
In conclusion, there are plus points to acquiring knowledge and being active. However, the downside would emerge consequently in terms of your health, your relational systems. Personally, I believe the benefits in terms of watching television outnumbered any drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18772563177 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79176936762 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649819494585 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9427952545 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8333333333 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3888888889 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301470912838 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763837846718 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684527018035 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162790079349 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072023737282 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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