what are the causes and effects of global warming?
Nowadays global warming is believed to substantially pose a threat to the inhabitants of the earth as well as natural environment. I will put forth various root causes , harmful and negative effects involved in this case as the phenomenon encroach upon the natural world,
Numerous factors associated with the climate change concern have proven to be problematic since they were arisen, especially in the past few years. One of human beings’ mind engagements is a change in the air quality. As long as air quality levels off, natural habitat seems more likely to be under threat. For instance, energy conservation decrease is indeed a remarkable variable which takes a heavy toll on the air quality. Nevertheless, the Earth is becoming much warmer. Humans do not take any sufficient actions so as to help curb energy consumption produced by fossil fuels leading to the exhaust fumes production. Similarly, constant activities of heavy industries play a great role in giving rise to toxic waste and pollution levels leading to wildlife destruction for there are a majority of animals being poisoned By either consuming unwanted rubbish floating in the water or touching them. Being exposed to hazardous waste not only peaks the likelihood of the mortality of at least a number of animals which are particularly living near industrial factories but also jeopardizes the lives of as many as endangered species which are on the verge of extinction.
On the other hand, acid rain is under spotlight owing to being another contaminant of concern ascribable to occasional sustainable principles such as a range of greenhouse gases, agricultural activities and a peak of pesticides usage. On balance , as long as population control methods do not switch into practical approaches, the necessity for more productivity of agricultural activities is more likely to be as a matter of urgency .As a result, acid rain changes the composition of soil, making it uninhabitable since soil Nitrogen is tend to emerge larger in amount as a detrimental factor which accelerates the death process in which a majority of animals die out. Furthermore, the more pesticides are utilized in view of eradicating pests that damage crops, the greater level of acidity of incoming rains come to existence besides the promotion of atmospheric build-up of methane gases which is considered as a major contributor to the greenhouse effect.
In conclusion, according to above-mentioned aspects, global warming is a significant world-wide complication which is caused by multitudinous determinants and affects to the tune of millions of creatures on the Earth in means of distinctive procedures likewise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, likewise, nevertheless, similarly, so, well, as to, at least, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 41.998997996 176% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2252.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29882352941 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10630821251 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607058823529 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 737.1 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.671428121 49.4020404114 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.230769231 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6923076923 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7692307692 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104545253723 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348475086769 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593648887461 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101746815252 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932917545974 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 78.4519038076 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.