To what extent has the Internet made life more convenient give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It has been admitted that the Internet is one of the most pivotal and incredible invention in the 20th century. Life is more convenient and comfortable compares to the period when people did not have the Internet .
In terms of studying and working, the Internet is an indispensable device for students as well as workers. Firstly, the use of Internet for searching informations make the working progress more effective. Instead of wasting time at the library looking for a piece of information in a pile of books in the past, nowadays, people only have to type the title of the information needed on Google, a variety of useful sources will appear at a glance. Secondly, online classes now become accessible with the Internet. Consequently, students and lecturers will save time and money. Especially in this COVID-19 pandemic, it will prevent people from meeting each other and reduce the ability of coronavirus spread.
In terms of relaxing the Internet now plays a crucial role on people's daily life, particularly for teenagers. First of all, social media connects people from all around the world and it becomes a platform for friends and relatives updating other’s situations. Furthermore, many youngsters cannot live without games online or other kinds of entertainment such as Youtube, Tik Tok etc.
In conclusion, the Internet brings many advantages to human beings and makes life much more different from the past. That's the reason why it is considered an unbelievable invention.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20661157025 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8638841416 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4792352325 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9230769231 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161749903602 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581643019909 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456379847157 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104418661861 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231981249314 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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