1. The rapid development of the Internet since the last decade has changed the conventional way of people’s life. As the web became more pervasive, so do the associated problems growth. This essay will examine the main problems of use of the web and possible solutions for them.
One of the major problems related with the Internet is that youngsters are being allowed to have uncontrolled access to potentially dangerous websites. For example, children can surf pornography sites containing lots of beid information such as nude images and clips at any time they use the Internet without their parents’ control. As a consequence, this will affect to normally mental and sexual development of children. Another worrying issue is a serious social disease called “Internet addiction”. In fact, there are many people who have typical symptoms as forgetting time, eating while searching the web or watching films and always getting annoyed, stressed and rervous when they can’t connect to the Internet. Internet addicts claim that their life will be meaningless and boring if they stop using the web although it is not true. As a result they sit in front of computer screen for many hours and their vision gets worse and subsequently suffer from obesity.
It is important that immediate measures should be taken to combat these problems. Firstly, parents should spend much time to follow the accessment of children for the Internet to avoid them looking for unhealthy information. Furthermore, the second measure for goverments is to limit the launch of unacceptable websites which provide dangerous information for young people. Finally, schools and parents have to more children aware of unreal life in the web by teaching practical lessons and organizing outside activities.
In conclusion, I think the Internet plays a key role in our modern life. However, even if it has brought many benefits, the web has led to substantial challenges. I strongly believe that various measures should be taken to deal with these problems that the Internet made.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, so, while, as for, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28398791541 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88981298132 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616314199396 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2591088792 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.882352941 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204011156388 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652432903785 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532503091042 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132006813938 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653885836732 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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