From the past few decades , there has been considerable debate regarding the advancements in travelling and its predominant concern is elevated integers of airplanes. While this trend is beneficial to great extent , I would agree that it has few down sides as well. In my opinion , this trend has made life easier for us all.
On the bright side, it is no exaggeration to say that this development has reinforced the trade globally. As delegates of all countries can fly to a destined place and share market strategies with each other. Moreover, it is quite convenient to travel via flights and all walks of people can have the ecstatic experience. Besides, it is also considered as one of the fastest mode of transportation. In this way , it has shrinked the world and bridged the gap between families living at distant places. For instance , if one lives in abroad and has a special occasion in his base country , he can be alongwith his family by taking a flight. However, if he chooses other mean if transport , he could not have attended the function.
Contrarily, it has also remarkable negative effects and one of them is pollution. Due to heavy increase in flights, air index quality has been extremely low. More than that , many fatal diseases have come into existence such as arthritis and lung cancer. Furthermore fares of flights are exorbitant and no common man can have this ride frequently. As a result it has been the catalyst of discrimination and also proverbial among affluent persons only. To curb this problem, prices of these rides should be canonical so that even the mediocre person can enjoy these services.
In conclusion, breakthrough of airplanes has brought plethora of advantages and got the people closer. However, shortcomings merely trigger the economy so these can be marginalised.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01650165017 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88691907655 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643564356436 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8992225712 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.4444444444 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94444444444 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108119940938 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285927354468 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268082489458 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0557812985845 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275909029343 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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