It is contentious that whether computers are the most significant creation of the last century. Personally, I agree that without the invention of computers, humans could hardly handle many problems or develop and modernize the world. However, I do believe that besides computers, in the last 100 years, various creations needed to be considered.
The fact is that the invention of computers ushers in an entirely new era of humans. After being published to the world, computers have supported humans from solving extremely basic problems to tackling the most complicated ones in every aspect of life. In education, computers contain management and assistance software which help educators have better access to studying and working conditions of each student and teacher. Without this software, the management staff at schools have to list the statistics by hand and paper which can be lost at any time because of poor security. In companies or any type of organisation can suffer from a similar loss of essential information without the aid of computers. Thesedays, within the COVID pandemic, computers become more and more inevitable to students and employees in order to commit to online learning and working.
On the other hand, in the last century, there were other inventions that are worth accounting for. First and foremost, the invention of the telephone and the internet have been changing the world since they help to keep contact among people in different regions around the world. The internet also brings various informative documents to many people from the shares of others. Secondly, the creation and development of digital cameras and videotapes play an extremely important role in preserving the history of humans.
In conclusion, despite the truth that computers are the most brilliant invention of the last one hundred years. Nevertheless, people should take other fabulous creations into good consideration to illustrate our gratitude towards the inventors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37620578778 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81325676444 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59807073955 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8243748188 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.466666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160893173976 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053772618821 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379634519586 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950106511526 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189159531873 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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