Nowadays , indifferent demeanor of children is a topic of concern. It has been observed by many that teenagers are tangled in frivolous activities which segregate them from rest of the world .Personally , I believe that this trend is frequent among children due to the internet and western culture.
To kick off, there are myriad factors that raise this issue .One of them is over surfing on internet .As internet provide easy access to each information and is flooded with plethora of readily available data as well , it has become the need of an hour for children to get their work done. Moreover breakthroughs of number of games and applications have intrigued the youngsters. Apart from this , online studies are proverbial. As a result, they fritter away more time on watching movies or playing games rather than studying . For instance, during the pandemic, it has been stated by many parents that their children have cut down the interaction hours with the family.
Furthermore , they got hyped by the western culture. Likewise they want to be spitting image of them and follow their footsteps. In other words , they want some space in very tender age and freedom as well. Thus, they start behaving in an unacceptable way and sometimes go off the rails and get into an unethical acts . Besides , this problem is occurring because both parents are supposed to be working .Therefore, children are lacking assistance, care and correspondence, this leads them to create there on another world.
All in all , as per the above mentioned reasons, it is apparent that some potent factors are working against them and that need to be fixed .Eventually ,I would urge to the Government to take some stringent actions to bring them back in the real world so they can contribute to nation's progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for instance, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97666666667 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6830663341 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616666666667 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.7114140399 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.846153846 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17122260925 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571187911081 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359821362917 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914243484432 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053836548615 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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