You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Environment issues are now one of the most controversial problems that people like debating about. Some people say that only governments and big companies should be given to be an important role in making a difference. In this essay, I will address my personal opinion and give relevant reasons.
I agree that it is necessary for governments and companies have the duty to make huge difference. However, they must encourage citizens to take part in individually. There are plenty of effective ways by doing all together. Firstly, the wide use of tumblers enhances less usage of disposable waste. For instance, Starbucks Corporation has offered eco-friendly promotion since the beginning of this year. If customers bring their own cups or reusable tumblers, the company give them perks; discount on their beverages, extra rewards(the client to choose what they want). The amazing works has greatly changed aspects of people thinking "Saving world is not easy". Then the word of mouth spread around people's society.
Secondly, excessive traffic also cause severe effect on air pollution. It generates a growing number of fine dust as well as global warming. Therefore, people themselves think that it is serious for all to affect their real life in different ways. The government legislates a eco regulation that switching the amount of taking private cars to public transportations. If someone who commute by taking vehicles no longer that 30 minutes in following the rule, citizens can get benefit. The fee decreases compared with regular price.
Overall, between governments, large corporates and privates should cooperate together to preserve Mother Nature . Additionally, the society has in charge of hand down clean and brisk nature to following generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...rence. In this essay, I will address my personal opinion and give relevant reasons. I agree ...
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Line 3, column 588, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...hoose what they want. The amazing works has greatly changed aspects of people think...
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Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...fferent ways. The government legislates a eco regulation that switching the amoun...
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Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...erate together to preserve Mother Nature . Additionally, the society has in charge...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42238267148 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90498751033 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.73285198556 0.561755894193 130% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2143555924 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.0526315789 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5789473684 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169383417403 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389749122905 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485528945085 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850207726992 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438426185188 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.56 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.