You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
You should write at least 250 words.
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Nowadays, people gravitate to gain or discover more information in this modern life. Therefore, giving desired information can earn newspaper or new programs on TV high incomes. However, news editors should have particularly standard what should be or should not be published. At the same time, there have to be a suitable way to balance good news and bad news.
To begin with, i believe that precious news must have two conditions. First of all, the information must be accepted and concerned by the readers. As a result publishers have to investigate not only their readers’ interest but also the ethical standards of their customers. Secondly, the quality of the article is the most important factor for a success of a TV program or a newspaper. To be more precise, the title must be credible and have a conceivable source, people are more likely to read or watch things that have high plausibility. As a result the news which consumes more interest and believability will attract a better amount of viewers to its side.
On the other hand, It is true to say that there is a large amount of terrible information extracted around us everyday . Especially some dishonest newspaper, titles without sources or without informative news, these things gives us nothings and make us confuse from getting information. Personally, i believe that more good news will help the society grow better. For example, if only valuable information are reported people can learn a lot from reading or watching programs. Furthermore, giving true information will help the people recognize their society real situation.
In conclusion, news editors should release high standard information to the audience. Moreover, the good news should have a higher rate of appear and the bad news should be heavily censored
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... news and bad news. To begin with, i believe that precious news must have tw...
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Line 9, column 111, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...errible information extracted around us everyday . Especially some dishonest newspaper, ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...information extracted around us everyday . Especially some dishonest newspaper, ti...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e from getting information. Personally, i believe that more good news will help t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15646258503 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86487008589 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56462585034 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1851274516 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.1764705882 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2941176471 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9411764706 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0613409248334 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0225578391943 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03795138051 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.046695157634 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388051582844 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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