Young people are often the first to suffer when job opportunities are scarce. In which ways does age affect employment opportunities?
How might employees deal with the issues fairly?
In the highly competitive job market these days, sometimes it is very difficult for younger people to get a job. Some youth employments might be fortunate to get an offer for short-term jobs as older employees still want to keep their professions or employers prefer to hire mature employees instead. The ways that affect the employment opportunities and some measures for organizations to cope with this situation will be discussed carefully.
To begin with, the main factor is many old people who suppose to be retired are still actively seeking employment or maintaining in their job fields....
- Some people choose to eat no fish or meat They believe that this is not better for your own health but also benefits the world as whole Discuss these view and give your own opinion 67
- Should male and female students to be taught together in college What are some of the problems and benefits of studying together and separately 80
- The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales( in various formats) of film from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 85
- The graph below shows the percentage sales of trainers made by a sportwear company in one year The Flying Boots trainers were lunched at the beginning of that year 62
- Many young people choose to take a year off between finishing school and starting university in order to gain work experience or to travel The experience of non academic life like this offers benefits the individual when they return to education To what e 78
the main factor is many old people who suppose to be retired are still actively seeking employment
the main factor is that many old people who suppose to be retired are still actively seeking employment
the number of vacancies for the younger people will be left out from the job opportunities are over concerned about the experience of younger people that might less than more mature people even younger candidates have better and solid knowledge.
Description: can you re-write this sentence? a lot of errors
------------------------
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 276 350
No. of Characters: 1450 1500
No. of Different Words: 161 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.076 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.254 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.877 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 106 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 78 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 57 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 52 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.231 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.627 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.769 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.332 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.561 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.056 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5