It is argued that working from home is more comfortable and stress free than working outside although, it does not involve face to face communications and it is not possible for the employees to express happiness with colleagues. Although, it makes a remarkable difference with the office work. In this essay i am going to discuss both advantages and disadvantages of working from home.
On one hand, advantages includes firstly, stress free environment with the people not facing each other which makes them more comfortable at home. Secondly, not getting up early for the office as, reliable work can be performed at any time. Finally, the people in these jobs are availed with high salary. So, we find many people opting for working from home and it is suitable for the women who can complete target of the job after their household chores.Moreover, these companies are in high demand with more job opportunities and people joining with an ease of earning a lot leading to economic development of country.
On the other hand, disadvantages include loneliness among employees with no face to face communications. Although, they will make lot of friends online but still cannot share happiness while in office area the working environment celebrates every occasion together. Another problem include health issues as, the job involve projects with the completion of target in sufficient time makes an individual to work more sometimes. Moreover, with high job opportunities leads high competitions among organisations.
To conclude, working from home have both pro's and con's involved but we see an increase in economic development of countries by increasing job opportunities. Improvements must be done by getting feedback from employees in both the department.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s to express happiness with colleagues. Although, it makes a remarkable difference with ...
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Line 1, column 310, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nce with the office work. In this essay i am going to discuss both advantages and...
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Line 3, column 456, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...of the job after their household chores.Moreover, these companies are in high demand wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3024911032 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02188670249 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555160142349 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7736831757 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.615384615 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315123080019 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121707484204 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135844266235 0.0667982634062 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21843218843 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136105804296 0.056905535591 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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