All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?
Recently, increasing fatness appears more and more popular over the world. This problem has bad effects on both kids and matures. The essay will look at the reasons and propose some measures.
First, the major cause probably dues to excessive food and productivity. According to some statistics, it shows clearly that there are too many foods produced as well as the declination of the price which tends to provoke enormous consumptions. Take the junk food as an example. Nowadays, junk foods and beverages become really available in cities. It is not only diverse but also has great taste and affordable as well so that the young generations seem to become foodaholics. Whereas the parents are now too busy to repair full energy meals for their kids, they choose fast foods instead. This issue could be addressed by educating people, particularly the youth, to improve their awareness of the harmfulness of eating such as preservative, trans fat, sodium, and saturated fat
Another essential problem is the shortages of doing exercise and muscle practice. The more living facilities people have the lazier people tend to be. In fact, they appear to get too many calories from foods to satisfy simple activities. Even though it requires very hard physical manuals to balance between inputs and outputs, it seems to be ignored until obesity. Dealing with this issue involves creating more public sporty spaces, launching campaigns of healthier living, and engaging to use bikes.
To sum up, the current rising trend of obesity derives from many socially unfavorable things. The urgent solutions mentioned above should be taken with the view to motivate the young and the middle ages to prevent from overweight.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 571, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
...nergy meals for their kids, they choose fast foods instead. This issue could be addr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, really, so, well, whereas, in fact, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1690647482 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57095619265 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687050359712 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.9916288386 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8125 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162295734138 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431208902417 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543192673481 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975551385077 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448491783276 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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