Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is belief of some people that artists ought to be provided with total independence to express their thoughts and ideas. In my opinion, an artist should be given certain amount of freedom to express any ideas in his/her work but he/she should be careful enough to not hurt the sentiments of people through his/her paintings.

Firstly, It is often thought that artists' skill and capability is attenuated if they are bound to work on restricted set of items. For instance, if an artist is asked to make portraits of people and his skill lies in drawing landscapes, he might not be able to produce his best work in that particular field. However, if provided with enough freedom, an artist might come up with something as spectacular as Monalisa's painting which displays multiple emotions. Additionally, many people think that if the spectators do not like some artist's work, they always have the option of skipping seeing his/her work.

However, famous artists should be careful in expressing any potential derogatory substance in their paintings. As an illustration, world famous Indian artist M.F. Hussain was remarked as a traitor and was eventually deported from the country for showing Hindu gods Ram and Sita in the intercourse. This kind of painting might hurt the sentiments of plethora of Hindu population who worship Ram and Sita and also consider them as a symbol of purity.

To conclude, artists should be given enough freedom so that they can demonstrate their best work in their paintings. However, they should be considerate towards emotions of certain sections of the society.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: artists'; artist's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, for instance, kind of, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09125475285 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69590061384 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54752851711 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2928404186 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.727272727 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302726846094 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123964365786 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835099593166 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192384267873 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792517101538 0.056905535591 139% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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