Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
This truth is a universally acknowledged fact that everybody wants to become popular in this contemporary era. It is believed that being a celebrity has numerous advantages. However, it has some drawbacks as well. These points will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, It is certainly true that almost every celebrity have a massive amount of wealth and they can utilize it according to their wish. They have luxurious cars, homes, and even private jets. For instance, In India, Mr. Virat Kohli who has become the prominent player of the Indian cricket team in these days. He usually gets an offer from international companies for participate in advertisements from which he earns abundance amount of money. Thus, it is vivid that celebrities have a high standard of living than individuals. Inclusively, they always get special warm welcome while traveling to other nations. What is more, they can meet some other imminent persons without an appointment indeed.
On the Flip side, some argue that if a person has followers throughout the world then he may face problems during outdoor activities such as shopping, walking and so on. So, they have become dependent on others to fulfill their basic needs. Additionally, they cannot spend fair enough time with kith and kin which may be lead to family problems. Therefore, it is apparent why some people gravitate towards this thought as a disadvantage.
After analyzing the aforesaid points, it has been proven that it has merits as well as demerits. According to my point of view, being a celebrity has more benefits but drawbacks cannot be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11985018727 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79699311317 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659176029963 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6839748888 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4117647059 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7058823529 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181247340068 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553695179467 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734943451973 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122752410742 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673242440084 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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