being a celebrity - such as famous film start or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benfits or more problems.
There is a general notion among people that the life of reputed personality is like a bed of roses. Some people often see only the greener side though they contain issues. Though film stars and sports persons enjoy a lot of luxuries, they also suffer some setbacks like lack of personal life.
Firstly, when we think of a reputed stars we tend to feel only the luxurious cars, there stay in posh hotels. This fancy come with diligent schedulethey undergone over the years and not an overnight success by forgoing innumerable parties and movies. secondly, They earn money in abundance by employing their time and resources in various buckets like endorsements, investments alongside their major source - acting / sporting unlike only employment in case of general public.
On the flipside, they attract media attention, hence the choice of words they speak has major impact on the society. They have to be absolutely surethat it does not affect their fans and at times they convey which themselves dont like. Their wins or looses will be seen as country's pride making them robotic and not to enjoy the field of their passion.
Additionally, These stars have on balance in professional-personal bifurcation, making them hard to move in public openly. The rate of divorces and second marriages is pretty common for this particular reason. There are plethora of jokes making fun and criticism of these personalities when they loose games.
On the whole, though the life of celebrities seems rosy with fancies, we forget they do have thorns making it more uncomfortable to stay with it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 252, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...orgoing innumerable parties and movies. secondly, They earn money in abundance by employ...
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Line 6, column 462, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...rting unlike only employment in case of general public. On the flipside, they attract media...
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Line 8, column 226, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...d at times they convey which themselves dont like. Their wins or looses will be seen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09923664122 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7288190061 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652671755725 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8319549297 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.769230769 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0994935867541 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323994360079 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033893710527 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0557409804998 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312717718671 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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