In various nations around the world, many people advocate that the most effective way for a country to advance is by spending additional resources on the younger generation. I partially agree with this statement, however I believe that there are more crucial areas of concern for a country to focus on in order to move forward.
On side of the argument, many people believe that by educating children and funding more on their well being can help a country to prepare for its future. The reasons for believing this could be mainly due to the fact that if we prepare the youth of today, they will be our future. The society will look up to them as they follow the culture and traditions. Moreover, providing the younger ones with quality education will not only help to create more employment opportunities but also aid in eradication of poverty. As they prepare them for higher education and invest more time and money on them, the real benefits can be perceived when they work in fields of technology and science for the advancement of their country. Also, they can participate in international sporting events to bring up their image. Thus resolving many of the societal issues by uplifting their country.
On the other hand, various countries especially the developing countries face challenging situations that cannot be resolved by diverting more funds on younger generations. To begin with, the basic infrastructure of a developing country requires more funding in order to provide their citizens with basic needs of roads safety and means of travel. For instance, some cities of India are highly congested and traveling from one place to another is an arduous task. So, the government should consider providing solutions like upgrading mass rapid systems (railways) for public for faster and convenient mode of travel. This requires immediate attention and cannot be overlooked while waiting for the younger ones to take over. Not only does the infrastructure of the developing countries requires immediate attention but also the healthcare system is a major concern for many countries. Only developed countries have the privilege of providing comprehensive healthcare system to its people. Therefore, to encourage the pursuit of growth and excellence the funds need to be diverted on these pressing matters to achieve their goals.
In conclusion, while both the views are commonly held in society, I believe that the most efficient way to allocate resources is by enhancing the heath care system and infrastructure facilities for the developing countries. Although one way forward for most of the countries could be to spend substantial amount of funds on children's education and overall development, but it might not be the case for other countries. Given this situation, governments around the world should spend a considerate amount of time to prioritize the needs of their country and spend accordingly for future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, look, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2463.0 1615.20841683 152% => OK
No of words: 472.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21822033898 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84046808491 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504237288136 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 771.3 506.74238477 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6123779662 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.15 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222987346638 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068803419092 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552523195567 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150384016981 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355253445296 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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