In this era of technology, the world has got overall control on the earth and now it's trying to get control the sky as well, therefore a large amount of money is spent on space technology. Space engineering is the way ahead to save the earth planet. Some individuals assert that expenditure on it is not adding any value rather issues of public on the earth should be addressed. I personally believe that although it is important to consider public welfare, but aerospace research should not be neglected.
Firstly, space exploration tends to help scientists in weather forecasting and major natural disasters coming to earth in the near future. Knowing the situation before, suitable measures can save the earth and human beings from major harms caused by these happenings. Moreover, aerospace engineering helps to identify major diseases and its cause with solutions. More or less, it is in favor of people living on the earth. Furthermore, advance technologies such as GPS systems, devices like smart phones and tablets are the blessings of space technology only. So, it is worth to spend money in this field.
However, problems of public should not be ignored by giving more importance to space technology. This is because, public is the most important asset of any country. Nowadays, climate change and corruption are well known concerns. Space exploration would only survive if human bodies on earth would exist.
So, earth issues should not be ignored at any cost. Thus, earth problems need to be considered as priority.
To sum up, considering all the facts above, aerospace engineering is also crucial for the benefits of the public, however, concerns on earth are required to be addressed at first level. I believe that it is worth to spend on space research until planet people are affected in any way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is worth to spend money in this field. However, problems of public should not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, such as, more or less, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03973509934 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67808543044 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566225165563 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3323361709 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5555555556 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242000418724 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753704090668 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482959557051 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132985088147 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308736648759 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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