In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with
other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes
the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
In Britain, It is often argued that grey-haired people in their retired age going to old-aged homes for their remaining life where nurses are there who often take care of them instead of their near and dear ones. I believe that it is a kind of negative approach from their younger generations to them, and young ones are the one who have to pay for this care.
Indeed parents are always investing their whole life and all earned revenues in their children's upbringing and paid a higher amount of fees in their academics. Therefore, it is a prime responsibility of their adults to keep in mind that they have to serves them at a late age. For example, it was published in one of the cosmopolitan articles that the numbers of old aged homes are increasing since the last decade in London because their own shelter was already occupied by their adult children.
The other reason is at retired age-old persons not able to perform their own daily chores perfectly as compared to their young age, Hence, their upcoming children have to look after them and provide assistance to them where they can find obstacles to make it easier. For instance, if the children are living abroad and not able to live with them, they have to hire a nurse who can look after them in their absence rather than thinking of taking help from authorities.
In conclusion, although children extremely get busy in their daily routine, I am on the firm belief that they are responsible for their parents and have to care for them in the same way as they are nurturing their small kids.
You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter
• describe the situation
• explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
• say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the room in which I am living at present time. I am facing many hurdles for the last one week from my roommate. So, I would like you to allocate me another room where I can avoid such noise issues.
All things were gone smoothly up to last week. After that, he had suddenly started to play music at loud volume at night and also sometimes he invited his friends for late-night parties in our room without taking my prior permission.
As you are aware the final university examination is going to begin next week, and I have lots of things to prepare before it begins. With this sound disturbance, it would be a herculean task for me to concentrate.
I would be grateful if you allow me any kind of single room or a sharing room with a room-mate of my class who is more concerned about the study.
I am waiting for your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Saumil
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...e one who have to pay for this care. Indeed parents are always investing their whol...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 83.0 24.0651302605 345% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 41.998997996 188% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2536.0 1615.20841683 157% => OK
No of words: 534.0 315.596192385 169% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74906367041 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80712388197 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49382030206 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 176.041082164 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505617977528 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 771.3 506.74238477 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 5.43587174349 313% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7268518506 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.272727273 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13636363636 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282097563841 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773990159217 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665355956411 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749895179712 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758280008905 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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