• Consumer goods have become the most important part of people’s lives. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
• These days, number of people purchase consumer goods for instance domestic apparatus, clothes and electronic gadgets increase gradually. Although this trend has drawbacks, I believed that overall this is a positive development.
First of all, buying domestic consumer goods is an excellent decision. As we know, many citizens are unable to find a job, they do not have sufficient education or qualifications that's reasons for unemployment is massive issue deal with individuals, communities, society. However, they can be a blue-collar for factories produce items that lead to fare of products become more valuable. More and more, we may export substance abroad with high expense. In addition, domestic economy will have enormous turning point to develop the nation. Thereby, human life progresses materially.
Secondly, besides improving material life, soul of people also need to be comfortable, relaxed, happy. Although foreign productsmay be better than domestic products, expense is overpriced and hard to use smoothly. With a similar good, most people want to buy by cheap price. Instead of using domestic goods help us reduce payment in buying commodities. That will not make people resolve financial problems. Moreover, using domestic product help people feel happy and proud of our country. After all, we must recognize human life progresses spiritually.
In a nutshell, I believed buying consumer goods is the best choice as a positive development because that decide have benefits for domestic companies, make value of items increase significantly and enhance the economy of our nation. It is not only improving material life, but also upgrading spiritual life.In another aspect, that proved we connect wealth and material possessions with happiness and succes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, after all, for instance, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57933579336 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83830768646 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653136531365 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.4226238173 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9411764706 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154154065714 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477568580528 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046947633698 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901452409228 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160209782334 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.