It is true that, in this contemporary era, we can do everything whatever we want in simple way through technologies. Technologies are being advanced day by day as well as popular in all over the world. According to my perspective, there are lots of pons and cons but here I would like to share only cons.
To start with, families have no extra time to give on their children because parents spend more than 8 or 9 hours on their work and feel wrecked so they prefer to take sleep rather than talking to their children that is why children have started losing interest in studies and they prefer to play whole day games. However, old parents used to give time to their children for their bright future. Secondly, children are losing their eyesight due to smartphone, televisions. Thirdly, obesity is the common problem in all children because fast food is being taken in high amount by them. For example, in recent reserch we got to know that around 63% children prefer to take junk food instead of taking healthy food.
Looking at the other reasons, everything is being done by technologies like study, work, and so on. Furthermore, right now it is very hard to find that type of love in families which used to common in past families because everyone is bussy in using their mobile phones. For instance, children prefer to make more friends on internet through social media and real life friends start disappearing. In addition, they have lack of confidence to talk with any other person in face to face conversation as well.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly technologies are mandatory in our life in each field we cannot use our dilapidated machines yet, we must understand that parents should take care or give attention to their children and use these things in a limit then it is astounding for them
- Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports Why is it Is it a positive or negative development 89
- In many Countries the amount of crime is increasing What do you think are the main causes of Crime How can we deal with those causes 73
- In the future all cars buses and trucks will be driverless The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages 78
- Some think that all entertainment TV programmes should educate people about the importance of social issues To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people say that sports play an important role in society Others however think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun pons seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of (pons)'.
Suggestion: lots of (pons)
... According to my perspective, there are lots of pons and cons but here I would like to share...
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Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...find that type of love in families which used to common in past families because ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74683544304 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58109925917 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591772151899 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5131468858 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.384615385 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6153846154 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137490714628 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469137848846 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0185664245201 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775149890766 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190764094482 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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