The mind of a human being is a place where thoughts flow in and out. There are people who have the idea that you should plan for the future while others think it is best to stay focused on the present. In this essay I will discuss how planning can be helpful in outlining the steps needed for achievements ahead, and why focusing on the present will only guarantee the success for today. These are my opinions until I come your way next time.
The main reason for future planning is because of the outlined steps it will provide for achieving the task Infront. To illustrate, if you make a plan to sensitize the youth in a few weeks to come, then the success of that sensitization is guaranteed. There is nothing you cannot succed in when you brainstorm ahead of time. In addition, the 2022 World Cup was a success after different committees were set up to enable them achieve the desired goal. Clearly, planning will lead you in the right path so as to ensure winning on the D-Day.
The only guarantee that one will succeed today rather than failing is focusing on the present. The Holy Bible advises that nobody should bother about tomorrow but our focus should be on the day. In a family, for instance, you can't solve daily challenges that arise unless you zoom in on the day set before you. Our attention should be on today given that it is here already. Similarly, countries have yearly budgets which focuses on the present year. So, it is right to say that the guarantee of today's success is focused on the present.
In this essay I have discussed how planning can be helpful in outlining the steps needed for achievements ahead, and why focusing on the present will only guarantee the success for today.
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- Immigration has a major impact on the society What are the main reasons for immigration To what consequences can it lead 61
- You were absent from an important event held by the company you work for Write a letter to your manager to apologize for this absence In your letter Tell your manager what event it was Say how important the event was State the reasons for your absence 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 502, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...lanning will lead you in the right path so as to ensure winning on the D-Day. The on...
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Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...the day. In a family, for instance, you cant solve daily challenges that arise unles...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, then, while, as to, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56634304207 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36274768824 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521035598706 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6256067914 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1875 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311301006692 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987697302267 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687405171084 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200049901154 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578881781168 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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