In any country, medical professionals and teachers play a vital role for upliftment of society. They are considered as a strong pillar of the society for their significant role to towards public. On the other hand entertainment and sports person represents country at international level as well. In further essay we will discuss both the sectors in details and will share the agreement or disagreement to the statement given.
Becoming a medical professional is not a laymen task, it requires a lot of taxing efforts and there is a huge competition as well. They need to go through daunting syllabus and exams to become a doctor or professor. They risk their lives and help others to survive, in spite of hectic schedule and lower pay scale they are continuously serving our nation. Unlike other countries in India we do not have enough medical professionals and qualified academic staff.
On the contrary, entertainment industry workers are paid more than they deserve due to their overwhelming fan following and stardom. They are celebrities and people follow the trend what they do, so all the business houses prefer them to promote their products and services. Due to the uniqueness of their talent and profession their demand in the public is high and accordingly that they do charge higher fees.
In today's scenario every doctor has its own clinic where they do their practice to earn more. Every teacher runs their private tution classes to get paid enough. I agree that the medical and teaching staff should get substantially paid towards their contribution to society. Government should fix the income slab for sports and entertainment celebrities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, so, well, in spite of, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13235294118 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.846490585 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621323529412 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.0471979497 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.0666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177990737713 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605640413937 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493673402938 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106966127891 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738546379945 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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