over the past decades, our way of living is being changed due to the variety of food. street food is becoming a bit important in our life. Some people believe that eating junk food has negative effects on our lifestyle and diet. I could not agree more with this statement. In this essay, I will discuss the factors that influence people to eat junk food.
The primary disadvantage of fast food is relying more and more on it. Teens are attracted to eating fast food as they find these foods tasty. The trend of international foods like pizza, burgers, salads, noodles has increased in India and is commonly available. also known as street food, people find these foods lip-smacking as makers put many spices and condiments to enhance its flavor, and deep-frying is done to improve its quality. Moreover, enchanting advertisements abet kids to consume these foods. I believe that eating junk food once in a while does not cause any damage to health however, overeating these foods definitely leads to harmful implications. For instance, according to recent research revealed by the Indian medical institute, almost 60% of heart failures have been reported in youngsters.
The main reason behind this abrupt rise in heart issues is unhealthy eating habits and overconsumption of unhygienic foods. it is the sole duty of parents to guide children and make them aware of the nutritional value of various foods. Additionally, parents should also discuss the negative consequences of consuming convenience foods. however, several changes are seen in the personality traits of many kids as they have started becoming lethargic and corpulent.
In conclusion, having discussed this topic in detail, i am inclined to believe that enchanting advertisements and poor parenting are the major culprits behind this worrisome issue. it is indubitably a disturbing trend as it can make
children obese, sluggish, and reckless.
- Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world What are the reasons for this and suggest some solutions 56
- Violence in the media promotes violence in society To what extent do you agree 56
- You stayed at your friends house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia You left a file with important documents in your room Write a letter to your friend describing the file and ask him her to return it to you by post 100
- New technologies and ways of buying and selling products are transforming the lives of consumers To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 67
- You live in a room in college which you share with another student However there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college In the letter describe the situation 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Over
over the past decades, our way of living is ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Street
...ing changed due to the variety of food. street food is becoming a bit important in our...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...sed in India and is commonly available. also known as street food, people find these...
^^^^
Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
...sed in India and is commonly available. also known as street food, people find these...
^^^^
Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...nd overconsumption of unhygienic foods. it is the sole duty of parents to guide ch...
^^
Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...quences of consuming convenience foods. however, several changes are seen in the person...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 55, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... having discussed this topic in detail, i am inclined to believe that enchanting ...
^
Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...r culprits behind this worrisome issue. it is indubitably a disturbing trend as it...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21359223301 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83142855692 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592233009709 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3495337008 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72222222222 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283972935034 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916063732189 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112784963849 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119896260641 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15073871405 0.056905535591 265% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.