Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general.
Spending less time on recreational activities has become quite common these days. In my opinion, the reason why seldom people spare time to their hobbies because of their hectic lifestyle and electronic devices, and this lifestyle may have severe impacts on individuals's mental and physical health and further, affects society.
Firstly, spending an enormous amount of time at the workplace in order to meet their ends has become quite common for the people in modern days. As a result, the people hardly get any time to think about their predispositions. For instance, an individual spend nearly 9 to10 hours at the office, and by the time they reach home, they feel quite exhausted to give a time for their liking. Secondly, with the advancement of electronic gadgets like mobile phones and computers, the people are often glued these devices either watching movies or playing games. Therefore, sparing sometime for their hobbies have become a thing of the past.
To start with the impact of this altering lifestyle, undoubtedly, predilections are the best way to unwind and release anxiety and stress , and when people keep sometime aside for their hobbies such as, playing cricket or doing paintings. This way they at least spend sometime on some fun and active pursuits. If an individual spend most of his time working at the workplace or operating on the computer neglecting his hobbies, it would make him mentally and physically sick. For instance, the obesity and blood pressure concerns are quite amongst young people nowadays. These unhealthy group of people leave an irreversible damage to the society.
In conclusion, chaotic work schedule and modern electronic gadgets deterring people from spending time on their hobbies. While, this way of living may deteriorate individuals intellectual and physical condition, it would weakened the foundation of healthy society as a whole.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...to unwind and release anxiety and stress , and when people keep sometime aside for...
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Line 5, column 610, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'irreversible damage'.
Suggestion: irreversible damage
.... These unhealthy group of people leave an irreversible damage to the society. In conclusion, chaot...
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Line 7, column 222, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'weaken'
Suggestion: weaken
...ectual and physical condition, it would weakened the foundation of healthy society as a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, at least, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28712871287 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69656599104 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57095709571 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3406186168 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192395882968 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691962779754 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358829160715 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130839137114 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013036531227 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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