in the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday.Do you agree or disagree?
A world tour has always been a dream for many people and it is unlikely that they would ever give up travelling to other countries. I strongly disagree with the aforementioned statement and this essay will describe why the trend of, visiting places in one's own country, will not gain popularity over the time.
Firstly, a holiday is ought to provide fun and relaxation. People tend to find a place far away from their routine life. A beach house or a hotel room with scenic atmosphere near hillside is impossible to find in every country. Moreover, the mother nature is full of surprises and it accomodates a large variety of beautiful natural phenomenas like northern lights in Finland or an erupting volcano, which are worthy to explore. Ofcourse, initially due to financial constraints a person might opt for a local trip but eventually his desires to make an international vacation would be inevitable.
On the other hand, this travelling pattern could disrupt economy, impact communities and cultural amalgamations. The decline in international travel will leave a negative effect on airlines as well as cruise industry, consequently impacting economy. In addition, the huge part of society, across the globe, depending on tourism for their livelihood will have to face devious repercussions. Also, the spread of traditions and different cultures among people would be compromised. For example, a Kutchi traditional blanket, handmade by a local is world famous today owing to its sale to international visitors. If these visits are decreased, local traditions may not get recognised and fade away easily, causing a financial drawback to locals and indirectly to country's economy.
All in all, it is mandatory to keep the business of international tourism alive in future as there might be few detrimental impacts on the society as well as individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01677532033 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4672233486 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.857142857 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14159298378 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043121546615 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360370606774 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728852672362 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349344176582 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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