Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is no doubt that means of communication has progressed drastically in today’s world.
Some people believe that connecting people in this modern era using letters is not mandatory.
I agree with the former statement and in this essay, I will support my view with examples.
At first, the conventional way to stay in touch with their loved ones is by writing letters. It is still the best means of conveying information in a detailed manner. Although, it takes time or even days to reach the letter by post or mail to the receiver. It has its own beauty of handwriting emotional or cryptic messages. For instance, During Wars the kings, and agents used to pass on the message to either kingdoms or countries in order to save their own families. Writing letters was a convenient way to communicate as that was the only way. New technology has now degraded the importance of writing letters.
Secondly, Nowadays, technological advancement has made the world closer. With the help of the internet, letters are slowly getting replay to text messages or calls. Even though the information passed is not content, it is relayed swiftly which is unnecessary at this time. For instance, recently due to the pandemic, everybody was able to check on their known ones well being because of modern means of communication. Furthermore,
To conclude, I explained the changes and ease experienced throughout the centuries in terms of communication. I strongly believe that letter writing is not only a way of communication but also the other means which can be easily utilized to contact anyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a detailed manner" with adverb for "detailed"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...the best means of conveying information in a detailed manner. Although, it takes time or even days t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ern means of communication. Furthermore, To conclude, I explained the changes and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01132075472 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91689570038 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596226415094 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6505159425 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0299723675337 0.244688304435 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00915191829208 0.084324248473 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0200136998738 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0100518383771 0.151304729494 7% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156903564352 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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