Legislators, nowadays, are under immense pressure to constructively allocate the budget to areas such as education and healthcare. Government spending on areas pertaining to arts especially music and theatre is considered futile. In my opinion, providing basic facilities to the general public is of substantial importance; however, this does not preclude the government to avoid spending in the field of arts due to benefits it generates for the people.
To begin with, expenditures on the construction of top-notch infrastructure related to public facilities are vital for the country’s development. A nation’s progress, as well as government performance, is measured by certain indicators linked to the standard of life its residents have access to. For instance, the high literacy rate is one of the key performance indicators which support the state’s economy in the long run due to its highly skilled workforce. Similarly, in order to improve the average lifespan of the people, lawmakers have to earmark an adequate amount of money for healthcare facilities.
On the other hand, any spending on arts being fruitful benefits and should not be considered squandered. Songs and theatre provides a great deal of entertainment to the people and concurrently add additional revenue to the economy as well. For instance, Islamabad arts council in Pakistan generates an average of $250 million annually by organizing concerts and stage dramas. Moreover, it provides a platform for local people to present their culture to the world.
To conclude, while allocating resources, the government must consider all the possible options and associated benefits; be it related to arts or education or healthcare.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 280, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...nion, providing basic facilities to the general public is of substantial importance; however, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, similarly, so, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56653992395 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23344183363 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596958174905 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3839064171 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111855842995 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375987667585 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369487527525 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662858074161 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440408653378 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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