It is often said that lots of money is being spent on national holidays public festivals and celebrations by the government. Some of the citizens express that the money can be used for various useful programs rather than spending a lot of money on these type of functions. I totally agree with this statement because we could save some amount of money for useful activities like improving the roadways and protecting the natural heritage sites of the country.
First of all, I believe that government could save some money for activities like maintaining the roads the general public would also be happy with this work because if the roadways are not in good condition in a country then a lot of people would face problems such as huge traffic congestion and accidents. If the roadways are maintained then people would face less problems in these type of situations. For example sometimes people go through different problems like going to office for an important meeting or going to the hospital in any emergency but if the roadways are not on good condition they may have to face difficult situations which may lead to their huge loss that's why it is very important for the government to spend less amount of money these type of programs.
Secondly, If the government will spend less on such events it could also be used for different programs like protecting the cultural heritage sites of the country, these heritages might include some very important information about the history and it is our core duty to protect them. By preserving these type of important sites we could find more about our ancient history which my attract many tourist and they might also be interested in learning our history in this way a lot of tourists might visit the country which will also be beneficial for the tourism industry in the country and create employment opportunities for the citizens as well. For instance, if we protect and preserve our cultural heritage sites tourists will get attracted and they will come to visit our country to learn more when they do this they will automatically create employment opportunities in tourism sector which is beneficial for the local citizens.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is important for the government to spend less amount of money in such events which is less beneficial for the local citizens rather than spending huge amount of money in such events it could be used for developmental works and for the welfare of people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...als and celebrations by the government. Some of the citizens express that the money can be ...
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Line 1, column 300, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: statement
...of functions. I totally agree with this statement statement because we could save some amount of mo...
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Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...tivities like maintaining the roads the general public would also be happy with this work beca...
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun problems is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...s are maintained then people would face less problems in these type of situations. F...
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Line 3, column 677, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...tions which may lead to their huge loss thats why it is very important for the govern...
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Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ourist and they might also be interested in learning our history in these way a l...
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Line 5, column 467, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this way' or 'these ways'?
Suggestion: this way; these ways
... interested in learning our history in these way a lot of tourists might visit the count...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2072.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 422.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90995260664 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62329873979 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.409952606635 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.345164158 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 207.2 106.682146367 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.2 20.7667163134 203% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.4 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241697588285 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125630509132 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764241709717 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180559509086 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909774665587 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 13.0946893788 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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