Health is wealth.This long age belief is getting bleak day by day as human moving towards modernization.Junk intake, mobile games thrown an entire generation confined to their bedroom only .This results to obesity and multiple critical health issues in this generation. Some section of people believes that imposing multiple physical education lessons in school may prevent this mishap. This essay will argue that increasing exercises in school will not resolve this issue completely.
Introducing multiple physical education training in school may resolve this issue to a extent only. Children learns what made them practiced. If we can able to inject the importance of physical training into children the rest will be taken care by them. Moreover, it will encourage parents and guardians to allow their children to practice physical education at home.It is found that children who got proper exposure to physical training in school still continue to keep them fit in later stages of their lives too.One more study found that involving in physical activities may refresh the brain more quickly than a child’s brain who sits idle. It is always good to include more physical training in school in order to avoid health issues.
A human being is responsible for their own self. Thus, unless people understands the importance of being fit and healthy, health related issues will continue to spark in.No amount of physical education in school is enough for a person who does not value the necessity of physical education.In addition, lifestyles of common people are hazardous and unhealthy nowadays. IT jobs, luxurious malls, delicious and unhealthy foods took a toll on human health.Various film actors and business were found obese before but they are thin and fit now. It is also found that when middle aged people discover serious health issue like diabetes, obesity they tend to give importance to their physical exercises.Finally, it is a person’s choice what he/she wants to do and cannot force upon by including multiple training.
This essay argued that whatever extra physical training one may include its up to us how we want to live our life. In conclusion, I want to say that addition physical training may motivate us to be fit but its up to us how we want to live our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, moreover, so, still, thus, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1170212766 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74373231177 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547872340426 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.736912132 49.4020404114 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 137.428571429 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205294469176 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774577293855 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569420396698 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123585629374 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576145599339 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.