With a growing population, many people believe that we should focus on more genetically modified foods.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?
The scarcity of nutrition supply is becoming apparent in the world, so some genetics scientists suggest solving this problem by transformed genes. This essay will consider the pros and cons of this kind of food.
Let us begin with merits of food with modified genetic structure. The first advantage is that it is resistant to both illnesses and pesticides. Most vegetables and fruits perish in large numbers because of various diseases as well as unwanted insects, but genetically altered food are immune to many infections and have an unattractive smell for pesticides. Another benefit is that its production is relatively more fruitful. Food with modified genes can grow faster and bigger than traditional ones, so more people can feed on them. Furthermore, it can thrive in dry regions. This sort of vegetation can flourish, for example, in desserts due to its ability to consume small amounts of water.
Despite the above mentioned benefits, genetically modified foodstuff has many drawbacks. First of all, it may cause some serious disorders. Food, which has genetic modification, has caused cancer in some cases, but medicine organization has not acknowledged these incidents yet. Secondly, genetically altered food has some negative impacts on the environment. This food usually poisons trees and small animals, when it penetrates the soil as household waste. Finally, it is hardly possible to find traditional food in large markets. Genetically modified food is prevailing in the market thanks to its low price. This situation makes the sale of conventional food unprofitable, so one has to address private gardeners if he wants to buy unaltered vegetables.
In conclusion, genetically changed food has both positive and negative sides. However, in the future, people will need to find a solution to food shortage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, as well as, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36111111111 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89792257435 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621527777778 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3701022089 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2631578947 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1578947368 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05263157895 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188942424585 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579328901826 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473780342481 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109944951727 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460849267432 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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