A good education is important for every person and every individual always tries to get good and better education according to his potential. Having a good university degree guarantees people a good job, i am not completely in favor of this statement, because sometimes it matters in few fields but most of the above that matters is a person's knowledge, hardwork, and his potential or abilities.
Any person graduated from any prominent university does not mean that he/she is more deserving for a good job, because it is not sure that a class of having 30 or 40 students, all of them would be talented or intelligent. As we are continuously hearing from many years, person's from many low profiled universities, get cleared many highly specialized entrance exams and get highly paid well reputed posts. It becomes possible for them because of support of their families and their own's hardwork and goodluck.
Doing study from a reputed or good university matters in some cases, just to make a strong profile and sometimes also matters for taking admissions for further studies, but in some cases it does not matter. For example;- if a person is well qualified from a good university but he does not have basic knowledge of his/her field, then even after getting selected for a good job, he might loose it. But on the other hand students from many universities, having sharp and bright Brain, also gets selected for good jobs/posts.
We have also many world wide famous personalities like Sir Isaac Newton, charles chaplin, many bollywood celebrities and indian cricketers also who are not graduated from prominent universities, but yet they are world wide popular along with their fantastic jobs.
According to my opine, graduated from a good university and an individual continuous hardwork or knowledge both things matters for getting a well versed job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...y hearing from many years, persons from many low profiled universities, get cleared many...
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Suggestion: worldwide
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...rominent universities, but yet they are world wide popular along with their fantastic jobs...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, for example, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06168831169 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74983516579 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.4984158167 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.9 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237912682729 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111762695741 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866101948107 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142463179688 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939346470212 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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