The scenario has been changed in regards to pursuing a job. People now not only prefer to have more than one career to uplift their standard and quality of life but also, develop their skills through education and training throughout their life. This essay will discuss the pros of education and multi jobs for an individuals.
To begin with, I think having a more than one career will be possible due to popularity of many options like telecommuting and online jobs. These opportunities will provide chance to fulfill their professional as well as personal commitments. Furthermore this kind of development will bring enormous benefits to people in terms of their growth in career, knowledge and experience. To elaborate this, when a person pursue more than one job this will not only enhance his monetary position but also develop many skills such as leadership quality, communication skills, management skills etc. This skills will play a vital role in their further growth like promotions.
Moreover, When an individuals get chance to do study throughout their life. They will develop their knowledge from time to time and implement that education in their job which will give them hope for promotion and also have an option to change their stream if they are not satisfied from it. For example it is published in the economic times that the proportion of youngsters in doing multible jobs inclined to its two fold and predicted that it will be raised to its fourfold in next few years.
In conclusion, it is concluded that With the advancement in technology and education field. People will be able to pursued their dream job by boosting their knowledge and skill from time to time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
The scenario has been changed in regards to pursuing a job. People now not only pre...
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...only prefer to have more than one career to uplift their standard and quality of ...
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...ir skills through education and training throughout their life. This essay will d...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...he pros of education and multi jobs for an individuals. To begin with, I think having a ...
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... individuals. To begin with, I think having a more than one career will be ...
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...ls. To begin with, I think having a more than one career will be possible d...
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...n with, I think having a more than one career will be possible due to popularit...
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
...sional as well as personal commitments. Furthermore this kind of development will bring eno...
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... and experience. To elaborate this, when a person pursue more than one job this w...
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...nication skills, management skills etc. This skills will play a vital role in their ...
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Suggestion: an individual; individuals
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0035335689 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66000533147 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56890459364 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6674724528 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.923076923 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222683549135 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873331720416 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516520622861 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147689607176 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367033002945 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.