The world is developing drastically. The development has increased the job opportunity in the market in all the areas. To grab such a good opportunity and good pay scale itis likable to have several career option.
During the old times, people were pursuing only one career option and developing the cognitive as well as motor skills. They used to work from their early 20es till their retirement in the same place and same position. Where now people don't want to survive in a monotonous life. They want to adopt the change easily and evolve.
The modern era of technology and science is booming at a higher rate. People want to explore more in a different field by learning diverse courses. Not like the old times, education now has a lot many options which one can take in a short span. This helps a lot to a person to work at the dissimilar places. We can see nowadays doctors pursuing a photography course and pursue a different career, engineer becoming an actor or musician. It easy to get hands on one's passion. Developing two different skills, one may get benefits to shift jobs which provide higher remuneration. However, if people don't keep options for several careers, it may get hard sometime to develop as individuals. It is highly necessary to keep an eye on current affairs which help to be aware of your surrounding.
In conclusion, I believe everyone should keep themselves open to getting experience in different field. This will definitely help them to earn higher and test their skills in the market
- You read an article in a magazine recently which might be useful for you and your friend’s job. Write a letter to your friend and describe an article and its content to your friend. Explain why it is good for you. Why would it be helpful for your friend 73
- You are going on a short holiday soon and would like to invite a friend to join you. Write a letter to him/her and say– Explain why you need a holiday.– Explain why you want your friend to come.– Where and when do you want to go? 73
- Discuss the impact of computer games on young minds. 67
- In these days people are not eating healthy and not exercising regularly What are the reasons for that What can we do to stop this behaviour 88
- Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people s lives automobiles bicycle and airplanes Use specific reasons and example to support your answer 52
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nt in the same place and same position. Where now people dont want to survive in a mo...
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Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ace and same position. Where now people dont want to survive in a monotonous life. T...
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Line 5, column 598, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...higher remuneration. However, if people dont keep options for several careers, it ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81368821293 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64851756443 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615969581749 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2123922253 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.3333333333 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6111111111 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94444444444 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143339225112 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357985371131 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398930767188 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759179548814 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182352349179 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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