Immigration is one the most essential phenomenon which has significant impact on society. Most of the countries across the globe are very much famous for their facilities that they provide to immigrants. With proper consideration of pros and cons i would like to explicate my views in coming paragraph.
Firstly, there are plethora of causes which support this process. People always want to have a better life and excellent way of living however, they do not get such facilities in their own country. Most of the individuals from third world moved to the developed countries for more income. For instance, Many people from small countries such as, Bangladesh and Pakistan moved to gulf countries or Europe to earn better salary. Developed countries provide them sense of security in terms of their future. Additionally, sometimes talented people leave their country and move to the develop one for better job opportunity which they don't get in their own place. Also, it is a win win situation for both the parties such as, people get good job and earn excellent money and at the same time country gets pool of talented individuals to help in country development. As well as, apart from employment and getting handsome amount of earning, safety also plays major role in immigration. Most of the crowd to immigrants leave that country which supports violence and don't provide safety measures to their own people which is necessitated to live without fear. These are some factors that contribute in immigration whether directly or indirectly.
Moreover, sometimes immigration cause more problems than it solves. It becomes the burden upon such countries who open their doors to immigrants, however there are many countries who welcome people to come and contribute in the development of their economy. There are some unskilled immigrants, such as refugees who migrates from one place to another.This becomes wholesome responsibility of the country to provide them job and training and run refugee training camps. This also has negative impact on country's population, if any country already dealing with population situation, in this scenario that can't effort increase its number. Additionally, the native residents feel offended if some outsider preferred over them at work. People who leave their country and try to settle down in a new place never feel that sense of belongingness before they get citizenship of that country.
In my conclusion to live better life and to raise their living standard people migrats from one place to another however, sometimes they don't meet their expectation. So it is better to think all the prospectives and outcomes before leave your country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, third, well, apart from, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2255.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 433.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.207852194 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75226096083 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508083140878 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 710.1 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.264972101 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.380952381 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.619047619 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0470682925364 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0219898048088 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413097216724 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0342888468881 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247301255993 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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