Social media sites have became one of the most popular online sites among teenager's and young adults. This has led them too far from the social meeting cultures. Nowadays the most popular sites like Facebook, Instagram and Twitter has gained millions of users, that spend more than half of their time on this sites.
The major drawback of using this site is that, people are forgetting the importance of meeting people in person, instead they are happy to sit at home and simply chat with their friends and family members. This could lead in lacking of social behavior among children's, which is an important part in adult life.
Use of social media to such an extent may lose the importance of social meetings, that are necessary in one's live. Moreover, there are some benefits as well in using such social sites.
Skype and other video or phone calling sites helps to maintain long distance relationship. This social sites prove to be a blessing for those who stay in different state or different country. The point is, using social media with some limitation is beneficial to the society.
In conclusion, the most important part of socializing is through social meeting, it should always be one of the most important thing in everyone's life. This helps in keeping in touch with one's friends and family who are near you.
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Suggestion: become
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87665198238 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31968341076 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5859030837 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0745832445 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.25 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0412271008865 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0180512380083 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0214858217975 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0269645756531 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178362031359 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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